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I am not very happy with this article as it stands. BenHur has added some really interesting stuff but his style of writing is very personal and the content does not sit will with the neutral tone of the rest of the article. However it would be a shame to loose it just because the tone is not in keeping with the first part! I have tried to make some changes but I don't feel that thay are any better and they risk mucking up what BenHur has done. What I think I will do is move BenHurs text into its own article and then just summerise the factual elements of his text into a much shorter section. I did this with the chastity belt section and it seemed to work quite well. Balzac 23:41, 21 July 2008 (BST)

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